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1 Canadian Forces School of Administration and Logistics (CFSAL). Resource Management Support Clerk Apprentice Training Military Writing Guide Reference: A-AD-121-CO/FP-000 Staff and Writing Procedures MILITARY WRITING IN THE DEPARTMENT OF. NATIONAL DEFENCE AND Canadian Forces . References: A. Standardization Agreement (STANAG 2066) - Layout for Military Correspondence (NOTAL). B. Federal Identity Program Manual - Treasury Board of Canada, Secretariat (NOTAL). C. A-AD-121-CO1/FP-000 Staff and Writing Procedures D. A-AD-121-F01/JX-000 Canadian Forces Manual of Abbreviations E. QR&O Words and Phrases - How Construed CHAPTER 1 - INTRODUCTION. 1. Purpose. The purpose of this document is to highlight the basic rules and formats for preparing documents within the Department of National Defence (DND) and the Canadian Forces (CF).

2 Conforming to the provisions of references A through E, balanced with DND/CF. requirements, the principal objectives are: a. to develop a familiarity and understanding of the components of administrative correspondence;. b. to simplify formats for administrative documents while still meeting government and NATO regulations (references A and B); and c. to provide examples of and guidance in the application of good administrative practices. 2. Application. This guide is designed for Resource Management Support Clerk apprentice level trainees to assist with the preparation of correspondence. It is not intended to replace, or supersede, the publications identified at references C and D. 3. Supplementary Documents. Commands may develop a correspondence programme that is responsive to their unique needs. Supplementary guidelines could include local instructions concerning letterheads, unique forms of address, use of authority lines, signature authorities and methods of internal correspondence.

3 4. Explanation of Terms. The terms in the sub-paragraphs below are designed to provide standard meaning throughout DND/CF with respect to their use in the preparation of correspondence: a. Administrative Correspondence. Administrative correspondence is any written, printed, or electronic communication (other than an electronically transmitted message) that is specifically addressed to one or more individuals or organizations;. b. Head. The head is composed of all material preceding the text and includes the letterhead, file number, originator, date, subject and the addressee;. 2/16 Military Writing Guide 6 March 2007. SME Sgt Roache c. Body. The body includes references and the text of the correspondence;. d. Close. The close contains all material below the last line of the body of the communication, including the signature block, authority line, annex listing and distribution list.

4 E. Originator. The originator is the individual whose signature block is on a document; and f. Drafter. The drafter composes the document for the originator. The drafter's position/appointment normally is shown after the file number as the suffix. 5. Types of Correspondence. DND/CF is subject to two sets of conventions for administrative correspondence, other than messages: a. Correspondence to Military Addressees. This is the normal means of corresponding within DND/CF and between NATO addressees consisting of letters, memoranda, reports and papers; and b. Correspondence to Non-military Addressees. This is the normal means by which DND/CF and the public correspond. CHAPTER 2 - GENERAL RULES. 6. Text. The style and tone of the text is at the discretion of the originator. It is the originator's responsibility to ensure the text indicates clearly to the reader: who sent the document and to whom, the date and subject of the document, what action is required from the recipient, and how and when that person is to achieve it.

5 Other guidelines governing the text are as follows: a. Grammar and Punctuation. Standard grammar and punctuation shall be used in correspondence. Two spaces follow colons (:), question marks (?), exclamation marks (!) and periods (.) at the end of a sentence. One space follows commas (,). and semi-colons (;);. b. Spelling. The most recent edition of the "Concise Oxford Dictionary", in accordance with reference E, is the authority for spelling;. c. Abbreviations and Acronyms. An abbreviation is usually a shortened form of a word, and an acronym is usually created from the initial letters of a group of words. Their use is governed by the regulations stipulated at reference D. The use of abbreviations and acronyms is encouraged, but care should be exercised to avoid possible ambiguity. If an abbreviation or acronym is used in correspondence external to the originator's unit, it is to be identified in brackets preceded by the full word or phrase for its first use, thus identifying the meaning to the reader.

6 Acronyms are written in capital letters without spaces or punctuation;. 3/16 Military Writing Guide 6 March 2007. SME Sgt Roache d. Gender-Inclusive Language. Language can both reflect and shape the way people are treated. Bias-free language is effective language and shall be used whenever possible;. e. Capitalization. Capital letters have three basic uses: to give emphases, to distinguish proper nouns and adjectives; and to highlight words in headings and captions. The following are examples of proper capitalization within DND. correspondence: (1) Governments and Government Bodies: (a) the Government of Canada; and (b) the House of Commons. (2) Titles of Office or Rank: (a) The Honourable Paul Martin, Prime Minister of Canada; and (b) Colonel Theriault. (3) Languages and People: (a) Francophones; and (b) English.

7 (4) Military Terms: (a) the Canadian Forces ;. (b) Canadian Forces Base Borden;. (c) The Canadian Decoration;. (d) EXERCISE RAPIER THRUST;. (e) a Boeing 747; and (f) Her Majesty's Canadian Ship (HMCS) HALIFAX. (5) The Salutation and Complimentary Close: (a) Dear Madam; and (b) Yours truly. 4/16 Military Writing Guide 6 March 2007. SME Sgt Roache f. Numbering. Numbers within DND/CF correspondence are governed by the following regulations: (1) Numbers from 0 - 9 are written in full (ex. zero, one, two);. (1) Numbers with two or more digits are to be expressed in figures (ex. 10, 649);. (2) Ordinals should be treated in the same way as cardinal numbers: (a) seven and seventh; and (b) 101 and 101st. (3) Initial numbers. Spell out a number or the word number when it occurs at the beginning of a sentence. This also includes the related numbers that closely follow it: (a) Three hundred persons were expected, but only twenty-three showed up.

8 (b) Number 16 was the last in the series; there was no number 17; and (c) Sixteen RMS Clks were tasked for the exercise and six remained at the unit. (4) Time of Day: (a) 0815 hours (full format); and (b) 2030 hrs (abbreviated format). CHAPTER 3 - ILLUSTRATED EXAMPLES. 7. The following pages illustrate examples of properly formatted DND/CF correspondence: 5/16 Military Writing Guide 6 March 2007. SME Sgt Roache Sample Letter To Single DND/CF Addressee One-inch margin Canadian Forces School of Administration and Logistics PO Box 1000 Stn Main Date in Full Borden ON L0M 1C0. 1000-1 (RMS). For single addressees, the full 9 June 2006. address and position (never name). Commanding Officer is identified. For multiple Canadian Forces Base Halifax addresses, use a Distribution List. PO Box 99000 Stn Main Halifax NS B3K 5X5.

9 RESOURCE MANAGEMENT SUPPORT CLERK. QUALIFICATION LEVEL THREE Refers to a message References: A. NDHQ OTTAWA D MIL C 234 241901Z FEB 05 Refers to a letter B. CFB Halifax 5600-1 (Adm O) 5 June 2005 (enclosed). C. CFB Halifax 5600-1 (CC) 6 Jul 05 Refers to a memo 1. A letter is a common form of correspondence within the Department of National Defence (DND). The tone is formal and can cover topics ranging from business and operations to congratulatory and welcome greetings. Abbreviations will not be used and the numbers one to nine will be written out. Two spaces proceed each period (.) and colon (:). All other punctuation shall be separated by one space. 2. The following formatting rules apply to a letter: a. the document is left justified;. b. a one inch margin is set for letters without letterhead, and a one and a half inch margin for those with letterhead; and c.

10 If a letter contains a service number the designation PROTECTED A will appear one inch from the top and bottom of the page. It is not necessary to number a single page, however if you have more than one page they must be numbered. 3. All DND correspondence shall follow a logical sequence including an introduction, development of the subject matter and a conclusion. The text should be accurate, brief in description and clear in direction. All information included in a piece of correspondence should be relevant to the subject matter identifying who, what where, when and why. Annexes and appendices are an excellent way to include large amounts of organized information that is pertinent to the subject of the document. Lastly, the document shall be free of spelling and typographical errors. Signed Full signature block Morin typed on the sixth line Lieutenant-Colonel from the last line of text Commandant leaving five clear spaces.