Commentary Notes Writing commentary means giving your ...

CommentaryNotesWritingcommentarymeansgiv ingyouropinion,interpretation,insight,an alysis,explication,personalreaction, "commentingon"a !Commentaryrequiresyoutothinkofsomeorigi nalthings(fromyourbrain) : donotuseI,me,my,we,us, avoidusingwould,should,could,mayormightL iteraturecommentarydiscusseswhattheconcr etedetailshowsaboutacharacteroreventina , "thisshowsthat" ofcommentaryfrom"Charles" (TS)Laurieisa mischievouslittleboywhois (CD)Forexample,Laurieplaysa trickonhisfatheratlunchandUsingquoteends it bytellinghisfather"gee,you'redumb."forco ncretedetailSentence3 (CM) ofcommentaryfrom"Charles" (TS)AlthoughLaurieisbecomingmoreindepend entinkindergarten, (CD)UsingparaphraseforconcretedetailFore xample,onthefirstdayofschoolLaurietellsh isparentsabouta (CM)Throughtheinventionof"Charles",Lauri eis (CM)EventhoughLauriesometimesseemsproudo fhismisbehavior, (TS)Pipisa (CD)Forexample,hemeetsa convictwhothreatenshislifebysaying"keeps till,youlittledevil,orI'llcutyourthroat" andtellsPiptobringhimsomefoodanda (CM)Pipis frightenedbytheman'swildappearanceandrou ghlanguagesinceheisclearlya (CM)A feelingofhelplessnessovercomesPipasherea lizesthathemustdowhatthemandemands.

Example 2 of commentary from "Charles" by Shirley Jackson. Sentence 1 (TS) Although Laurie is becoming more independent in kindergarten, he still needs to inform his parents of his struggles. Sentence 2 (CD) Using paraphrase for concrete detail For example, on the first day of school Laurie tells his parents about a boy named Charles who was ...

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1 CommentaryNotesWritingcommentarymeansgiv ingyouropinion,interpretation,insight,an alysis,explication,personalreaction, "commentingon"a !Commentaryrequiresyoutothinkofsomeorigi nalthings(fromyourbrain) : donotuseI,me,my,we,us, avoidusingwould,should,could,mayormightL iteraturecommentarydiscusseswhattheconcr etedetailshowsaboutacharacteroreventina , "thisshowsthat" ofcommentaryfrom"Charles" (TS)Laurieisa mischievouslittleboywhois (CD)Forexample,Laurieplaysa trickonhisfatheratlunchandUsingquoteends it bytellinghisfather"gee,you'redumb."forco ncretedetailSentence3 (CM) ofcommentaryfrom"Charles" (TS)AlthoughLaurieisbecomingmoreindepend entinkindergarten, (CD)UsingparaphraseforconcretedetailFore xample,onthefirstdayofschoolLaurietellsh isparentsabouta (CM)Throughtheinventionof"Charles",Lauri eis (CM)EventhoughLauriesometimesseemsproudo fhismisbehavior, (TS)Pipisa (CD)Forexample,hemeetsa convictwhothreatenshislifebysaying"keeps till,youlittledevil,orI'llcutyourthroat" andtellsPiptobringhimsomefoodanda (CM)Pipis frightenedbytheman'swildappearanceandrou ghlanguagesinceheisclearlya (CM)A feelingofhelplessnessovercomesPipasherea lizesthathemustdowhatthemandemands.